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She's running.
It's coming.
Keeps racing.
Still chasing.

Heart beating.
Courage fleeting.
Rain pouring.
Thunder roaring.

Lungs burning.
Stomach churning.
Wind shrieking.
Tears stinging.

Heat flashing.
Lightning crashing.
Bolts striking.
Pulse spiking.

Sweat freezing.
Breath wheezing.
Sparks flying.
Hope dying.
©2008 *LadyofCinema
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*liquidether:iconliquidether: Jan 28, 2008, 10:32:49 AM
Talk to me.....send me a note and vent. I promise I won't give any advice, I'll just listen. Lovelovelove you my darling girl. :hug:

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In my temple boy be warned
Violence doesn't have a home now but ecstasy
that's as pure as a woman's gold
~woopyfrood:iconwoopyfrood: Jan 28, 2008, 11:39:14 AM
Wow.....that would make a pretty cool song.....

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*LadyofCinema:iconLadyofCinema: Jan 28, 2008, 4:32:45 PM
I've actually had several people say that. Thanks. :thanks:

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and you can tell
from the state of my room
that they let me out too soon
and the pills that I ate
came a couple years too late
:pills:
~spyke1of24:iconspyke1of24: Jun 11, 2008, 8:39:46 AM
Hey nice job I love how you kept each line 2 words long. very powerful like the beatings of a drum.

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I, Chang Tzu dreamed i was a butterfly. Now that I wake I do not know if I am a man who dreamed of a butterfly, or a butterfly dreaming I am a man. ~Colin

If your going to be original, expect to be copied~Mike's hard lemonade.